Ninpocho Chronicles

Ninpocho Chronicles is a fantasy-ish setting storyline, set in an alternate universe World of Ninjas, where the Naruto and Boruto series take place. This means that none of the canon characters exists, or existed here.

Each ninja starts from the bottom and start their training as an Academy Student. From there they develop abilities akin to that of demigods as they grow in age and experience.

Along the way they gain new friends (or enemies), take on jobs and complete contracts and missions for their respective villages where their training and skill will be tested to their limits.

The sky is the limit as the blank page you see before you can be filled with countless of adventures with your character in the game.

This is Ninpocho Chronicles.

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[Punishment] Rejoice Not Over Me

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Seryuu Kubitas awaited the trainee with a mixture of trepidation, fervor, and that keen feeling for justice that the meanies at the Aesculapium described as 'mania.' If she were manic for justice, then so be it! If the whole world were as hard for justice--wait, hard? That wasn't the right word at all. She cast about mentally for a better term. What could help her find a better word that meant "enthusiastic" or "excited" or "lustful," oh wait, that was no good either. If the whole world were as excited for justice as she was, then the world would obviously have been a much better place with less need for punishment of the naughty and the wicked. Today, she awaited a very naughty boy indeed, who had not only been caught by his target in the act of pick-pocketing, but had the bad fortune to have been pick-pocketing a Sennin, and then had been disobedient on top of that... Obedience to the strong was #1 in the Kubitas List of How to Become Stronger and Punish the Naughty & the Wicked. After all, if your strong superior were wicked, then the best thing to do was to learn from that strength and overcome your wicked superior! It was a classic narrative in all of the great historical literature, after all.

She had at her disposal a cat o' nine tails, a whip, a cane, and a low T-shaped post for the boy to brace himself against. He had not been assigned so many lashes that a real prop had been decided necessary. If it had come to that, other officers would have been in attendance to watch Jinkotsu Kosei be strapped in lest he fall unconscious or attempt to fight back.

[Awaiting Kosei]
 

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The room in which Kosei's interrigation... or torture, from the looks of things... was dull and boring. Aside from the assortment of whips, one designed for cutting into the back of the victim, and the other designed for mere bruises and beatings, a cane, and a post built low into the ground, there was nothing other than the air and space inside the room itself. Besides the... well, the actualy attractive female inside, no one else occupied the small room. It was too bad that this girl was going to have to punsh him...

Oh God, I hope that didn't sound wrong.

Kosei took a deep breath of cool air, and let out an audible sigh. He still thought the whole thing had been blown out of proportion. The ring had been returned momentarily, and... and he still wanted to know why the Sennin had tried to murder his brother. Speaking of his brother, where had Akkuma been lately? Kosei hadn't seen him in a while.

Anyway, the teen stepped towards the lady and kept a blank stare. "I'm here, I guess."


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"Is that any way to greet your onee-buntaichou?" the young woman replied sternly. "I'm Yukibitas Seryuu! Soldier of Justice!" Justice would obviously be capitalized in Seryuu's world.

"Today you are here for the carrying out of 11 lashes, one for petty thievery and ten for insubordination to a Sennin. Um... Usually there would be some medical person around but they're all drunk and..." She mumbled, "I know the green hand no jutsu so they said that counted and I could do both." Seryuu cleared her throat. "So take off your shirt and grab the T! Flagellation just shows that you're cool, and you're cool right, little brother? Pain is evil being evicted from your corpus! Take your eleven like a man!"

During her intense moment of cheerleading, she forgot to offer Kosei the customary leather scrap to bite down on. She hefted the cotton rope cat o' nine tails.

"One!

"Two!

"Three!

"Four!

"Five!

"Six!

"Seven!

"Eight!

"Nine!

"Ten!

"Eleven! Punishment complete! Remember, trainee, you are barred from receiving chakra-accelerated healing to alleviate this punishment." The youth's back was viciously welted and in some places the skin had torn such that blood sprung up along the lines left by the flogging. "Let me wipe your back with this antiseptic before you go, okay, little brother?"
 

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Kosei walked towards the girl performing his punishment... or, maybe it was towards the post. They were so close to each other at the time that it really could have been said that he was headed towards either of the two. "I'm sorry, ma'am..." he muttered almost inaudibly, due to his pensive state at the moment. She had grabbed the Cat o' Nine Tails. Luckily for him, it was only a threaded variant, and not the kind designed to inflict maximum damage, literally ripping the victim's back apart. There was no glass, no metal, no sharp stone on the ends of the nine whips... but he knew that this was still gonna hurt like a bitch.

As directed, Kosei removed his shirt, revealing nearly flawless skin all the way around... for now. He guessed that this was life's way of saying that he needed to earn his stripes-- literally. He knelt down, one knee at a time, and took a deep breath. closing his eyes, he breathed out, then fell forward onto the T-post. Almost immediately came a cry from Seryuu.


ONE!

Kosei squinted in the pause between the yelling and the whip connecting with his back. It wasn't long, but it alone felt like an eternity, until only a moment later the whip actually struck him. Kosei felt nine distinct things hit him, dragging across his back until they finally left, leaving horrible-looking, horrible-feeling welts across his back. Unprepared for the pain, Kosei bit through part of the inside of his cheek and yelled out, sending a little bit of blood shooting out onto the floor in front of him.

TWO!

Kosei was just as unprepared for the second strike as he was for the first. This time, he had the presence of mind to keep his tongue and cheeks away from his teeth, as nine more cords of rough-knitted cotton, designed to lacerate the skin, ripped across his back and caused more parallel welts to appear. He grunted, then gasped suddenly. He still had nine more to go. Eighty-one more hits from this whip, the Cat o' Nine Tails, as it was called.

THREE!

With the connection of the third strike, Kosei began to feel warm, sticky liquid flow down his back. Blood. He was bleeding, and he wasn't even halfway done yet.

FOUR!

Another strike, and more blood that he could feel. He cried out once again, meanwhile letting go of the T-Post. Instead of remaining in a push-up position, he let his arms fall to the floor, his body slamming against the wood, then bring his arms up under the post, as if he were hugging it. His fingernails clawed into the rough wood, leaving a few splinters under them. It wasn't exactly the smoothest wood.

After five or six lashes, all the pain seemed to flow together, his senses dulling so much that he was on the brink of passing out. Sure, as a shinobi he was trained to take pain, to fight through injury... but he couldn't fight back in this situation. He had to sit there and take it, lest his punishment be made more severe. He didn't know how long the rest of it asted, though he imagined it couldn't have been more than a few seconds, or a minute at the most. Either way, he opened his eyes finally to the torturer offering to wash his back with antiseptic, which Kosei accepted, more or less. It was difficult to understand what he said, but Seryuu interpretted it as a "yes." The antiseptic was like a fire ignited on top of Kosei's back. He could feel every single individual strike, each one that had broken the skin and caused some real damage to himself. Hopefully the scars would go away... but you never knew. The thief spit out more blood, then took a rag and put it in his mouth, which Seryuu allowed him to keep. He didn't know what she meant by "little brother," but he hoped it was a term of endearment, like "no hard feelings" or something. Either way, he felt himself being bandaged up, white wraps being circled around his chest and back... "Thank you..." he said, referring to the wraps and medicine.

Kosei got up and walked out, not saying another word to the other ANBU. What was there to say? There was only something to do. He had a mission in a few days... and he hoped he could heal without medical jutsu in time.


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