Hanae -- +1 (Imagery); -1 (Grammer/Spelling); +1 (Continuity) => +1
Yuzuki -- +1 (Imagery); -1 (Grammer/Spelling); +1 (Continuity) => +1
Iolanta -- -1 (Missed Deadline) => -1
Ayame -- +1 (Imagery); -1 (Grammer/Spelling); +1 (Continuity) => +1
Hakruen --- +1 (Imagery); -1 (Grammer/Spelling); +1 (Continuity) => +1
Team Short --- Roll (16) + 1 (Buff) = 17
Team Long -- Roll (2) + 2(Buff) = 4
Hanae grabs the ball and runs up to a pole
(Success)
Yuzuki attempts to disarm
Hanae by throwing a kunai at her
(Success
Ayame attempts to grab the the kuani aimed at Hanae
(Success)
Ayame attempt to use
Thermal Maw at the pole
(Success)
Haruken throws a barrage of genjutsu using her fists at
Iolanta All Success except Deaf
Yuzuki attempts to distract
Hanae by shooting
Storm Bolt Success
Hanae attempts to throw the ball into the goal
(Failed)
Total -- Team Short (2); Team Long (1)
[spoilername="Airiko Yuzuki"]
Edited said:
Yuzuki’s cheeks blushed in embarrassment as Hakuren planted a kiss on her forehead. She felt a little bit more confident and strong because her teammate was worried about her. Few moments ago she felt fatigued and almost tired but now she was ready to jump, scream and win the game. The Yyoung girl quickly takes out kunai to throw it at Hanae when she notices that all ground area was surrounded in fire. Sso, the kunai was put aside for few moments. Although, she did understand that the fire was probably sensei’s doing and it was all to make the game more interesting but still it was quite disturbing. Yuzuki makes way to the wooden pole and she sees the brown haired girl already running up at the pole with ball in her hands. The tall girl concentrates her chakra and starts running up the pole that is few poles apart from another girl while trying to be quiet as possible. In short time she makes it to the top on the top and looks around while standing firmly. Ioalanta was distracting Hakuren and both of them didn’t seem to see noticing the fire yet. Like a nice person she is she throws a kunai at the Ioalanta. Nnot directly into her but at her side wanting to distract her from Hakuren. Then , Yuzuki turns her attention at the girl with orb in her hands and quickly takes out one more kunai. Besides from being distracted quickly , Yuzuki was pretty good aim. [color]and Tthat’s why she observes Hanae once more and throws kunai aiming it at her hands. Hoping that it would hit her carpal bones and that Hanae would drop the orb from her hands.
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Yuzuki blinked confused as another girl blocked her kunai. Well, she didn’t see that coming from the bo-staff girl. Not to waste any time , the blonde took out her penultimate kunai and moved forward Hanae’s direction. When suddenly wooden poles were on fire and young student got distracted for a second. Young girl looked down at the ground realizing that not all poles all on fire and the fact that girls on the ground are fine too. Although, the flames did look really realistic and still were kind of confusing Yuzuki she moved forward. The blonde girl runs quickly after the brown haired girl though she wasn’t on the same speed as her she tried her best to catch up. If anything would happened the fire armor would show itself and even when Yuzuki didn’t know that she had this armor she still had feeling that she is safe. Young girl had to react fast and do something because she simply followed Hanae now. When the brown haired girl reached the line with mere seconds Yuzuki pointed at her with two fingers and send electric wave at her hoping that it would distract or stop her from throwing the ball into goal. That was fastest thing she could think of. Besides she could only do that or throw another kunai at Hanae which would be just a waste at this moment.
Revised said:
Yuzuki’s cheeks blushed in embarrassment as Hakuren planted a kiss on her forehead. She felt a little bit more confident and strong because her teammate was worried about her. Few moments ago she felt fatigued and almost tired but now she was ready to jump, scream and win the game. The young girl quickly takes out kunai to throw it at Hanae when she notices that all ground area was surrounded in fire so the kunai was put aside for few moments. Although, she did understand that the fire was probably sensei’s doing and it was all to make the game more interesting but still it was quite disturbing. Yuzuki makes way to the wooden pole and she sees the brown haired girl already running up at the pole with ball in her hands. The tall girl concentrates her chakra and starts running up the pole that is few poles apart from another girl while trying to be quiet as possible. In short time she makes it to the top and looks around while standing firmly. Ioalanta was distracting Hakuren and both of them didn’t seem to see noticing the fire yet. Like a nice person she is she throws a kunai at the Ioalanta not directly into her but at her side wanting to distract her from Hakuren. Then, Yuzuki turns her attention at the girl with orb in her hands and quickly takes out one more kunai. Besides from being distracted quickly, Yuzuki was pretty good aim and that’s why she observes Hanae once more and throws kunai aiming it at her hands. Hoping that it would hit her carpal bones and that Hanae would drop the orb from her hands.
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Yuzuki blinked confused as another girl blocked her kunai. Well, she didn’t see that coming from the bo-staff girl. Not to waste any time, the blonde took out her penultimate kunai and moved forward Hanae’s direction. When suddenly wooden poles were on fire and young student got distracted for a second. Young girl looked down at the ground realizing that not all poles all on fire and the fact that girls on the ground are fine too. Although, the flames did look really realistic and still were kind of confusing Yuzuki she moved forward. The blonde girl runs quickly after the brown haired girl though she wasn’t on the same speed as her she tried her best to catch up. If anything would happened the fire armor would show itself and even when Yuzuki didn’t know that she had this armor she still had feeling that she is safe. Young girl had to react fast and do something because she simply followed Hanae now. When the brown haired girl reached the line with mere seconds Yuzuki pointed at her with two fingers and send electric wave at her hoping that it would distract or stop her from throwing the ball into goal. That was fastest thing she could think of. Besides she could only do that or throw another kunai at Hanae which would be just a waste at this moment.
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[spoilername="Uchiha Ayame"]
Edited said:
Ayame almost cried out as wooden fangs sank into her ankle. Recovering quickly Ayame looked down at the damn wolf thing and with quick thinking she shoved her staff into the gap left between the back of it's mouth and her ankle before using the staff as a crowbar forcing the creature’s jaws off of her. Pulling her ankle away and ignoring the blood streaming from the puncture wounds ,Ayame twisted the staff hard enough to break the damn things teeth and hopefully stop it from coming after her again. Looking around Ayame realised that the situation had changed drastically while she dealing with her little problem but her teammates had defended the goal and now had the ball which was excellent. This also uUnfortunately, this meant that Hanea was also open to an enemy kunai throw at herwhich Ayame wasn't going to allow. Ayame winced as she lifted her injured ankle up, so with a wince as her ankle hurt Ayame sped forward to a nearby pole and sprinted up one using her chakra to grip as she reached the top and quickly jumped across. Thankfully she was close enough to jump in front of her teammate and take the kunai straight into her forearm which she had used to guard her vitals. Despite her efforts, the lingering This also meant that the pain caused her to lose balance falling from thee pole and hitting the ground at a weird ankle making her shoulder pop audibly. Clenching her teeth at the sharp pain dancing around her brain and making spot in her eyes , Ayame used the last of her pain tolerance to slowly make some very painful hand seals before breathing a small flame at the nearest few poles with the hopes of setting them on fire so it would be hard to follow Hanae across the poles. With that done Ayame laid there holding her dislocated shoulder while the kunai stopped her wound from bleeding too badly.
Revised said:
Ayame almost cried out as wooden fangs sank into her ankle. Recovering quickly Ayame looked down at the damn wolf thing and with quick thinking she shoved her staff into the gap left between the back of it's mouth and her ankle before using the staff as a crowbar forcing the creature’s jaws off of her. Pulling her ankle away and ignoring the blood streaming from the puncture wounds, Ayame twisted the staff hard enough to break the damn things teeth and hopefully stop it from coming after her again. Looking around Ayame realised that the situation had changed drastically while dealing with her little problem but her teammates had defended the goal and now had the ball which was excellent.Unfortunately, this meant that Hanea was open to an enemy kunai throw at her which Ayame wasn't going to allow. Ayame winced as she lifted her injured ankle, sped forward to a nearby pole and sprinted up using her chakra to grip as she reached the top and quickly jumped across. Thankfully she was close enough to jump in front of her teammate and take the kunai straight into her forearm which she had used to guard her vitals. Despite her efforts, the lingering pain caused her to lose balance falling from thee pole and hitting the ground at a weird ankle making her shoulder pop audibly. Clenching her teeth at the sharp pain dancing around her brain and making spot in her eyes, Ayame used the last of her pain tolerance to slowly make some very painful hand seals before breathing a small flame at the nearest few poles with the hopes of setting them on fire so it would be hard to follow Hanae across the poles. With that done Ayame laid there holding her dislocated shoulder while the kunai stopped her wound from bleeding too badly.
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[spoilername="Hakuren"]
Edited said:
So the student wanted Hakuren’s attention. Well, she now has it and was going to find out how wrong she was to challenge her one-on-one. Sake floats out of there their bottles and envelopes Hakuren’s hands like boxing gloves. Hakuren lays an assault of punches on the poor student. With each successful strike the sake would sink into Iolanta’s skin and form a seal. The seals are illusions now bound to Iolanta, but at least one did not seal. Hakuren recognizes this rejection of a genjutsu. It was a result of a slot already been filled.
It was then she noticed the flames burning the ground, but oddly enough did not set the wooden pole ablaze. She thus concluded they were all placed under an illusion, which is not exactly a problem for her. Each brew she makes is its own illusion and this practice has been passed down through generations. During her academy years she would often come to class drunk, but her father fought for her and kept her away from any really harsh punishments. He explained that in order for her to eventually take over his business, she must built up a resistance to it and training had to start at a young age. Resistance she did developed and thus canceling this little illusion should be no problem with her willpower.
Revised said:
So the student wanted Hakuren’s attention. Well, she now has it and was going to find out how wrong she was to challenge her one-on-one. Sake floats out of their bottles and envelopes Hakuren’s hands like boxing gloves. Hakuren lays an assault of punches on the poor student. With each successful strike the sake would sink into Iolanta’s skin and form a seal. The seals are illusions now bound to Iolanta, but at least one did not seal. Hakuren recognizes this rejection of a genjutsu. It was a result of a slot already been filled.
It was then she noticed the flames burning the ground, but oddly enough did not set the wooden pole ablaze. She thus concluded they were all placed under an illusion, which is not exactly a problem for her. Each brew she makes is its own illusion and this practice has been passed down through generations. During her academy years she would often come to class drunk, but her father fought for her and kept her away from any really harsh punishments. He explained that in order for her to eventually take over his business, she must built up a resistance to it and training had to start at a young age. Resistance she did developed and thus canceling this little illusion should be no problem with her willpower
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